For long periods of time, any kind of personal writing within an academic
text has been looked down upon. Teachers have been teaching their students to
avoid the use of words such as I, me, you, we, us, they, they’re, their, and
other terms that show possession. These possessive terms suggest a much more
personal form of writing and one that is much more opinionated as well.
However, many rhetorical texts feed off of these personal opinions and ideas.
They are just written in a way that seem less opinion-oriented and are not as
obvious to readers. Rhetorical research papers are not limited to simply
looking up information and putting it into the paper as “evidence.” Many
articles have been written as arguments and conversations between the writer
and the audience. These arguments require the writer to look into different
perspectives and sides of a topic. The writer’s purpose is to argue their
point, and also discuss and detail other thoughts and ideas about the same
topic. They can show their own point of view without being nailed down to
something specific. Writers can even give both ideas a “winning” chance by
representing every idea in a positive way. They don’t argue that one idea is
“right” over another; they research opposing ideas to discover the argument in
a construct. The argument comes from past ideas and conversations. People come
up with ideas and viewpoints based on these past conversations and arguments
over a topic. Every argument is brought up by another argument.
The reality is that writers cannot avoid at least some kind of personal
writing within a text. Even if it is a research paper, research that is found
has most likely somehow been formed because of a past construct or idea of the
same or a similar matter. Writing, even in an academic setting, has personal
attributes and reflects certain values, virtues, and emotions. These types of
researched writings and argumentative texts tend to have some kind of effect on
its readers, whether it be emotional, logical, social, or even economical.
Overall, these effects are quite personal and any type of research has the
ability to create further arguments and conversation, which is what these texts
are within themselves.
Stuart Greene’s article, “Argument as Conversation: The Role of Inquiry
in Writing a Research Assignment,” explains some of these concepts according to
this particular writing construct. Greene’s focus lies on arguments and writing
in terms of conversations. He claims that “…you need to demonstrate to readers
that you understand the conversation: what others have said in the past, what
the context is, and what you anticipate is the direction this conversation
might take” (19).
In other words, context is everything. For example, in sociology, context is very
important and is viewed on very personal levels. Every person sees some kind of
behavioral or societal concept in a different way based on their own personal
experiences and their own culture in the society. This is similar in writing.
The difference being that the contexts are taken and formed into language to be
put into words, all for an audience to read, interpret, analyze, and think
about themselves. It is all very much provoked by thought and emotion. Context
is important in writing because for a successful conversation, a writer must
take on opposing views and try to understand the conflict at hand. The point is
not to know immediately what to research or to only research one aspect.
Truthfully, a writer or researcher finds out much new information during the
research process, learning more about the topic itself and discovering
completely new arguments that can cause even more debate and controversy. This
all has some kind of personal basis.
Donald Murray also discusses the concept of personality in writing with his article, “All Writing Is Autobiography.” He claims that, “…the texts we create in our own minds while we read—or just after we read—become part of the life we believe we lived.” Murray thinks that person experience plays a large role in reading and writing. People read and write what interests them or about things that they can relate to. A person would not read or write something they did not enjoy unless they were required to. People’s own lives typically revolve around what they choose to read and write during their time.
Donald Murray also discusses the concept of personality in writing with his article, “All Writing Is Autobiography.” He claims that, “…the texts we create in our own minds while we read—or just after we read—become part of the life we believe we lived.” Murray thinks that person experience plays a large role in reading and writing. People read and write what interests them or about things that they can relate to. A person would not read or write something they did not enjoy unless they were required to. People’s own lives typically revolve around what they choose to read and write during their time.
Voice is another term that can be used with this writing construct. Peter
Elbow writes about voice in his article, “Voice in Writing Again: Embracing Contraries.”
Voice is a clear expression of who we are in our writing. With the person
elements through voice, Elbow also discusses the importance of “embracing
contraries” and thinking about both sides to something. Two opposing views can
have a very personal basis and reasoning, which can be connected with our own
voices in writing.
This is terrific work, Holly, and I can tell you spent some time on it. You're really doing some excellent things. My favorite moment is this one: "The reality is that writers cannot avoid at least some kind of personal writing within a text." I think your introduction is fairly successful, though I would like to hear a little bit more about this construct, how teachers and some disciplines seek to eliminate the personal from texts. I think this has interesting intersections with the work Kantz does and the general pretense of objectivity found in the sciences. More generally, it is about the view that language is just a neutral transmitter for knowledge/facts, and that we can use it without agenda/subjectivity. I think it makes sense to dwell on the construct just a bit before you move on. But when you do start describing how language is always personal- I really like what you're doing. One thing though: instead of "possessive", which is usually used to described "their," "his/hers" why not just talk about these words as "personal pronouns" which is a broader category.
ReplyDeleteI think the conversation you've got going is really working pretty well too. Your selection of sources is great. You might think about also using the bell hooks (in ROW) and maybe the Kantz. You might also find a primary source for talking about the "don't use I" construct. Perhaps a guide to writing in the sciences or something like that. Look around and see what you can find. It should be something that shows the prevalence of this "rule" in mainstream society, I would think.
I think you're off to a great start here, Holly. Thanks for your hard work.